Falling Backwards *POTD 6-01-06*
Falling Backwards When the sun begins to falls And the cold night takes hold Yellow stars begin to shine As the echoes of a lonely wind Slowly blow through my mind In dreams you come to me Open arms...
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Llucy, this is so full of melancholy yet so beautifully worded as well. Please stop by Poems For The Heart and Soul, have a look around, and sign my guestbook or drop into the Poetry Factory
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Unquenchable fires of longing in the face of loss. This is the emotional state that so often led Poe's poetic voices to the precipice of madness. Dear poetess, you've certainly wowed me with this...
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Your title matches perfectly with these lines of longing.
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i am so amazed at how ones can so accurately express what the soul yearns to say....what the soul feels....it is truly amazing the way you have written this....i can truly relate.... thanks so much...
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An expressive write that is full of emotion, fits the title like a glove
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A very heartfelt write... I too liked the title well done!
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Quote:In dreams you come to me Open arms beckoning me in Youre so alive in my mindThe mind can enchant and haunt all in the same moment. Very nice, Lucy. ~ Becky "Pure as we begin Move by will alone...
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Lucy **hugs** I so felt this... Thank you for sharing your gift with us here... Bri~
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This is felt deeply, Lucy! Very deeply. You've given a voice to that longing for something that may never be. Thank you much for sharing! This is beautiful! Donna
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*sigh* so perfect sorrows in your lines, Lucy. Beautifully penned._________________________________________________
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Thanks to all for the kind words and read! "Thou art to me a delicious torment" - Ralph Waldo Emerson 1803-1882 "My slender waist and thighs are exhausted and weak from a night of cloud dancing"...
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who'd thought lament'd be so yummy beautiful honeyCome Visit DreamLand ×´He Came ¨) ¸.´out of¸. ´¨)no where ¸.*¨) (¸.Always´ (¸.´A Friend ¸.´ ¸.´¸.*`of the victim-» «.At the.*¨)...
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a hauntingly beautiful piece, albeit tinged in sorrow...it's sadness is so very touching I adore the last stanza, it closes this piece perfectly Quote:All I see and all I wish to find Once laid within...
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I am humbled and honored!!!!!!!! "Thou art to me a delicious torment" - Ralph Waldo Emerson 1803-1882 "My slender waist and thighs are exhausted and weak from a night of cloud dancing" ...Read More
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Quote:All I see and all I wish to find Once laid within your arms I feel you haunting my soul Back and forth I fall to you Lingering want circling my mind Searching for your love That Ill never again...
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Perfect! You've touched a sad place in my heart with this one. Karen
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Congrats on the honor Lucy, this excellence truly deserves the spotlight... *Clapping* Bri~
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Quote:In dreams you come to me Open arms beckoning me in Youre so alive in my mind And I dont want to lose sight Of the way you taste and breathe For in the lonely morning rays Youll just fade into...
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Secret, Karen,Witch,and Bri- thanks for the read and understanding the words. The orignal poem was written quite some time ago with a friend and had a different feel so I pulled it out of the dust and...
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